E-Portfolio Assignment

End-of-Semester ePortfolio

For your graded ePortfolio assignment, please do the following:

  1. Make sure that each of your units is uploaded to a separate page within the Rhetoric section. Do include relevant images or video.
  2. On the main Rhetoric page, add a Module that showcases what you’ve learned this term. There are many ways to approach this assignment. Here are a few possibilities (choose one, or come up with your own):
    • Talk directly about what you’ve learned. You might include a passage from one of your essays as an example of a crucial skill that you’ve mastered.
    • Demonstrate your mastery of a writing skill in a short 2-3 ¶ piece on any topic in any style.
    • Talk about the influence of skills you learned in Rhetoric in your writing for another class this term.
    • Present a favorite passage by a professional writer and talk about what that writer does that you would like to imitate in your own writing.

Trial Run: due Saturday, December 12 at midnight.

Final Draft: due Saturday, December 19 at midnight.

Unit Five: Infographic Assignment

Working from the BU Housing Dataset, create an original infographic that tells an interesting story about some particular group of Boston University students: where they come from, where they live on campus, what schools they attend. You may choose to contrast two groups, or focus on characterizing the variety of students within a single group.

In characterizing a group, you may choose to combine two categories of data: defining “West Campus” as consisting of X, Y, Z dorms, or “the Midwest” as consisting of A, B, C states.

To isolate a group for data analysis, you will need to delete rows from the data set, leaving just the people from a particular BU College or a particular dorm or set of dorms. To do so, alphabetize the data by column, select rows and delete them.

To create a graph or map, you will likely need to count the total # of students who are in each college, or from each state. I showed you how to do this in Lecture using the “COUNTIF” function. If you missed lecture, get notes from a friend.

Useful sites for creating graphics:

Your finished graphic should tell a story about students at BU—not in words so much as by bringing the data to life. But do use words, sparingly, to ensure we know what we’re looking at: title, labels, etc. And don’t forget to consider the role of color in shaping the viewer’s response.

Finally, and in addition, write 1 page account critiquing and explaining the choices you made in creating this infographic. Give a short ¶ to each of the following topics:

  1. what group(s) you chose to focus on and why;
  2. the principal challenge you faced in transforming raw data into your graphic and how you overcame it;
  3. what choices you made in crafting the finished product.

Unit Four: Hamlet

Shakespeare’s Hamlet is a central text in the Western humanist tradition.

Among its remarkable virtues is a presentation of characters that excel at the art of discovering the available means of persuasion—that is to say, characters that are effective rhetors. The most persuasive and eloquent of these characters display remarkable talent with many rhetorical skills: they are excellent judges of situation and audience; they are capable stylists, employing different registers of diction and figures suited to their intent; they advance arguments shaped by all of the Aristotelian proofs, both inartistic (such as appeals to authority, laws, or promises) and artistic (logos [enthymemes & examples], pathos, ethos [demonstrations of good will, wisdom, & moral virtue]). Too, there are many characters that are less excellent rhetors, and to consider their failures allows one to learn quite a bit about how rhetorical efforts can go wrong. Additionally, these characters not infrequently turn their rhetorical talents on themselves, using rhetorical strategies in soliloquies that judge, praise, or deliberate regarding the given character’s own actions.

Among the assumptions shaping how these characters persuade each other and themselves are a number that derive from texts that inform Shakespeare’s presentation of the world of the royal court, perhaps most especially Machiavelli’s The Prince and Castiglione’s The Book of the Courtier. Note that, while the works of these two Italians are somewhat similar in intent, they are very different in their tone and spirit. Machiavelli’s work is designed to instruct a ruler on the terms of a very pragmatic politics, and suggests that moral virtue is finally irrelevant—or even a hindrance—to political success. Castiglione, on the other hand, offers a text shaped by a sort of Platonic idealism, one that assumes the courtier will be most useful to his prince when he can lead that ruler down the path of the good. In other words, he articulates a vision of political success as inseparable from moral virtue.

Your paper should analyze an argument advanced by any one character in Hamlet. This will require you to focus on one longer speech by that character or (if the argument is presented across several lines of dialogue because it is part of an exchange) on part of one scene. We encourage you to make the passage you select as short as possible: tighter focus lets you go deeper. Your paper’s central claim should address one of the following prompts: Continue reading

Unit Three: The Rhetoric of Photographs

MigrantMother-Lange Sources Photographs and readings for this essay can be found on the CourseDocs section of the website, linked above. Note that this essay is a closed system: you are not allowed to use any source other than those directly linked from the CourseDocs site. In choosing articles and in supplying some links, I’ve tried to anticipate your needs; if you find you need something more, see me in office hours. Note also: the picture at right will be discussed extensively in class, and so is not a viable as the main focus of your essay—though you may reference it in an essay on another photograph.

Essay Assignment

Write a five-page (1300-1600 word) analysis of one of the photographs on the front page of the CourseDocs site. Your essay should deepen the reader’s understanding of what makes this photograph so rhetorically powerful—or, alternatively, should use the photo as an opportunity to challenge the reader’s preconceptions, for example as to why photographs matter or what makes them eloquent. Your essay can draw on a second photo for purposes of comparison, and should make reference to at least one of the secondary sources we read during the course of this unit, as well as information directly linked from the CourseDocs site.

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Pulling in an Expert

In the upcoming essay, you may want to draw on a keyterm from one of the advertising experts presented in Frontline’s The Persuaders documentary. As I mentioned in class a week ago, you’ll need to cite the expert, not the movie, as the origin for the term, while at the same time citing the movie as the origin of your quotation.

Here are the mechanics for doing so:

  1. Name the expert (including his/her qualifications) in the main text of your essay.
  2. Add a parenthetical source citation at the end of the sentence.
  3. List the documentary’s vital details in a Works Cited page appended to your essay.

Thus,

The commercial’s repeated presentation of Slim Jim Dare Sticks as a treatment for emasculation can be considered an instance of “emotional branding,” a recent trend in advertising discussed in the 2003 Frontline documentary The Persuaders. In one interview segment, Kevin Roberts, CEO of Satchi and Satchi, suggests that the brands that command “loyalty beyond reason” are those which have made themselves into “Lovemarks” (II, 9:50). Applied to Slim Jim’s “Intensive Care” segment, Roberts’ insight suggests that the brand is trying to forge a tough but brotherly kinship with its (male) customer base. Women may prove fickle and undeserving of your devotion, but bros and Slim Jims will stand by you when times are tough.

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Works Cited

The Persuaders. Dir. Barak Goodman and Rachel Dretzin. Other details for you to work out. Your citation should reference both the movie (2003) and the website (went live Nov 9, 2004). Note also my use of “Hanging Indent” ¶ format.

Stuff I’d like you to note about the example above:

  • The sentence right before the reference to Roberts and The Persuaders, setting up a connection to Roberts’ keyterm.
  • The two sentences after the reference to Roberts’ keyterm, making clear how it applies to the advertisement I’m analyzing.
  • The words used to identify who Roberts is, suggesting why his opinion matters. Note that I got that info from The Persuaders, which makes a similar effort to ID Roberts.
  • My example uses 1½ sentences to introduce Roberts and his keyterm idea. If I needed 3 or more sentences, I’d want to consider presenting his idea as a digression ¶ (something we practiced last unit).
  • I’m using MLA source citation, and you should too. But to force you all to practice, I’ve left out most of the citation I created. You can create your own citation using the Handbook you purchased at the start of the year, or you can use EasyBib. Either way, you’ll need bibliographic info on the documentary, information that’s available on The Persuaders’ website: look for the Credits page.

Unit Two: The Rhetoric of Modern Advertising

The core aim of rhetoric is persuasion, and we can learn a lot about rhetoric by studying one of its purest forms, modern-day advertising. An industry widely recognized for its sophisticated grasp of the psychology of persuasion, advertisers teach us that persuasion depends not just on what you say but how you say it. Inheritors of a rhetorical tradition traceable to Aristotle, ads routinely reframe logical arguments as emotional appeals.

In addition to Rhetorical tradition, modern advertising draws on findings from the past century of sociological research. Harnessing fundamental psychological needs for identity and belonging, ads sell products as a mode of self-expression. Thus, this unit will provide an opportunity for interdisciplinary study, drawing on material you’re learning in social science to achieve a deeper understanding of the topic.

The starting point for our discussion of the methods and cultural impact of the advertising industry will be The Persuaders, a documentary on advertising created in 2004 by Douglas Rushkoff for PBS’s Frontline. While its title reminds us that the roots of advertising lie in the rhetorical tradition, the movie focuses on recent changes in the industry as advertisers adopt new methods and pioneer new media, from product placement to guerrilla marketing to narrowcast ads to statistical research.

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Unit One

The first unit this semester will focus on building writing skills crucial for college. Whereas later units will each culminate in an essay, this first unit will present shorter passages in a graded portfolio. By centering attention on short assignments, we can work on the relationship between paragraphs, putting off for later the challenge of generating a larger essay structure.

Our topical focus will be YouTube videos that teach: What makes YouTube a good medium for instruction and education? What makes some videos more effective than others? What, if anything, does this suggest about how best to reach readers in a written essay?

Key skills covered:

  • vivid description that takes the place of viewing a video
  • narrowed focus on a key quality/aspect of a source
  • comparison of two sources with an eye to learning something about one of them
  • the three Aristotelian appeals: logos, ethos, pathos.
  • introducing an unfamiliar to the reader
  • introducing an essay’s project to the reader

Paragraph Transitions

Analytic Transitions

  • Explain: make sense of something described just above.
  • Build on: introduce the next step in a logical argument.
  • Question: raise a doubt or even wholly undercut the prior argument.
  • Note an unexpected consequence: this combines elements of the prior two: it builds on, but in a way that causes a tonal shift somewhat like calling into question.
  • New angle: for example, you might consider sound after focusing on visuals.
  • Zoom in: look at an instance of a trend or pattern noted just above.
  • Zoom out: name the pattern which the prior ¶’s topic is an example of.
  • Intensify: double down on a claim made just above, with (for example) more telling evidence.
  • Give another example: keep this to a minimum. It means that the ¶ fails to take us somewhere new. See if you can’t present this new example as intensifying your argument, or offering a new angle on the topic.

Narrative Transitions

  • Result: what happened next.
  • Cause: what led to the events of the prior ¶
  • Lateral shift in space: Meanwhile. back at the ranch…”
  • Temporal shift: “Two weeks later, …”